Tuesday, December 18, 2007

Pensieve's Poetic License-December


The theme for December's poetry is Cinquain-Celebration! Come and join Pensieve's Poetic License this month.  Here is my attempt:
We Are
Humans
Pale, frail
Being, breathing, living
Going through the motions
Fragile.

9 comments:

lisa's chaos said...

Yes indeed we are. Love it!

Karmyn R said...

TRUE!


Dreaming What ifs...

Sandy said...

some days more than others!

kitten said...

Very good and true!

Pamela said...

A very interesting twist on the subject. Wow.

Robin said...

Junebug, sometimes I feel more like this than others...the past couple of days, a whole lot :/.

Thanks for articulating poetically the sometimes-condition of man.

Are you okay? {{hugs}} just in case you could use 'em :).

Robin @ PENSIEVE

paisley said...

i can certainly relate to this one,,, feeling a bit fragile myself this holiday season.... excellent write....

Junebug said...

Robin: Yes, I am fine. I was just having a nostalgic moment, I seem to have them frequently this year. Every once in a while when I am driving by myself, I get this very nostalgic feeling. It's so odd and yet comforting. I wrote a poem about it that I will post for the next month's PPL.

Beth/Mom2TwoVikings said...

Thanks God for His strength!